17A – Elevator Pitch No. 2

1) The pitch.

2) A reflection on the feedback you received from your last pitch. Describe what stood out to you as important, what feedback surprised you the most, what feedback you think was outright wrong or silly, what feedback you thought was most useful and insightful. 

What stood out to me was how to do it properly dress nice, no sitting, no webcams all that stuff. sadly I was in a rush because I had exams all this week so did a couple of wrong things. but I am sure if we have to do a 3rd elevator pitch ill do great.

3) What did you change, based on the feedback

I did the easy things that were recommended such as standing.